Thursday, January 3, 2013

In order to give your classmates more feedback on their projects, you will read/listen/view their projects, and comment on them by posting a comment here. Please use the following format: Project: (the names of the people who designed the project) Reviewer: (your names) Give at least two pieces of warm feedback and at least two pieces of cool feedback in your post.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Esteban,Sean,Caitlin

Website: Sean & Caitlin's

warm comments: nice display, organized, nice slide show, a little wordy

hulia & hosilynn said...

Project: Haben Kelati
Reviewer: Julia & Josilynn
Warm Feedback:
1.) Original website type which has a nice structure (information put together well & organized.)
2.) Good amount of information that's easy to read/understand.
Cold Feedback:
1.) Has a decent amount of pics/diagrams, but could've had a few more.
2.) Thought the plum pudding model was the first theory to be closer to actuality, you could've started out at the very first theories.

Anonymous said...

Esteban Caitlin and Ugly Kid named Sean

Andrew and Esteban's website

very organized, detailed, interesting, well thought out

Anonymous said...

Project: Mary & Liz
Reviewer: Julia & Josilynn
Warm Feedback:
1.) The quiz was very creative.
2.) The pre-read was very helpful, and the click-through for the quiz answers was very useful.
Cold Feedback:
1.) The pre-read was a little wordy, unlike the click through; it could've been a little simpler?
2.) Quiz could've been a little longer??????????

Anonymous said...

Project: Esteban & Andrew
Reviewer: Julia & Josilynn
Warm Feedback:
1.) Good amount of pics/diagrams.
2.) The information is organized.
Cold Feedback:
1.) A little too wordy...
2.) The twitter and game was a little offtopic????

Anonymous said...

Esteban, Caitlin, and Sean

Project: Christine & Michaela

warm: very informative and organzied
cold: almost too organized, could be more visually pleasing

Anonymous said...

Project: Bridget and Haley
Reviewer: Brianna and Karen
Warm Feedback:
1) Good idea, creative
2) Good pictures
Cold Feedback:
1) kind of short

Anonymous said...

Project: bishop
Reviewer: estaban julia josilynn
Warm
1.) very useful information with ltos of diagrams
2.) very very organized
cold
1.) a little wordy
2.)

Anonymous said...

Project: Tiana and Carmella
By Mike and Hannah

Warm
We thought the website was very well organized and informative,
Cool
Although each tab was formatted the same way so it felt a little repetitive and boring.